Have I cadence?
Have I meter, tempo, measure?
Is there intonation?
Is there source for pleasure?
Is it harmonic?
Is there music? Is there beat?
Is there inflection?
Does it make you tap your feet?
Have I tone?
Have I pitch, accent and sound?
Have I modulation?
Do you dance upon the ground?
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Beautiful poem !!!
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Thank you Rekha. I cannot tell you how good it feels to get feedback on my work. Especially positive feedback.
Thank you.
regards
Grant
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Welcome Grant. Its with me too. I also love feedbacks / comments. Love n light.
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Thank you Rekha.
I follow a few poets who write in Hindi. I might make you my ‘go-to’ person to check my translations. 🙂
Regards
Grant
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Welcome Grant. Its with me too. I also love feedbacks / comments. Love n light.
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