Unspoken? It is not spoken. It’s read.

That doesn’t mean it’s unheard, unsaid, or dead.

It’s quiet. It’s just not spoken instead.

That I do not speak, does not make it weak.

That I do not speak, does not make it bleak.

Still, it is filled with every emotion.

The idea creates a commotion,

May yet find followers of devotion,

It makes sound in your head and doesn’t get heard.

One can read in bed and not say a word.

Absurd though it sounds, it is unspoken.

Words, in books that are found, are not broken,

And should not be considered as token.

This poem is just for something to read,

Its reading should not make an artist bleed,

I’m just trying to replant a seed.

It is not really any new way

This idea, of words you do not say

For the love of God I love Sarah Kay,

You know, spoken word needs a vibration,

Yes, you can cite this, my own citation,

Poetry not heard is no violation,

What if one likes it, but have lost one’s voice?

What if one likes to register their choice?

Are they not allowed to read and rejoice?

I as well have held the odd microphone,

I as well have used the odd borrowed phone,

Theatrically I held my breastbone.

But I refuse, I cannot suffer fools,

Won’t be driven by poetry rules,

Or be lectured by the poetry schools.

Unspoken? It is not spoken. It’s read.

That doesn’t mean it’s unheard, unsaid, or dead.

It’s quiet. It’s just not spoken instead

Critique by Alexis Ingram

“Unspoken” is a thought-provoking poem that delves into the notion of communication beyond the spoken word. Through its rhythmic structure and repetition, the poem highlights the power and validity of silent expression, particularly through written language.

The poem begins with a clear assertion that the lack of verbal articulation does not equate to insignificance or absence. It challenges the common assumption that only spoken words hold weight, emphasizing that the quietness of written language does not diminish its impact or relevance. This theme of silent strength is reiterated throughout the poem, reinforcing the idea that silence does not equal weakness.

The speaker explores the multifaceted nature of unspoken words, suggesting that they are imbued with a rich tapestry of emotions and ideas. The phrase “Still, it is filled with every emotion” underscores the depth and complexity inherent in written expression. Furthermore, the poem suggests that unspoken words have the potential to incite change and inspire devotion, hinting at the transformative power of literature.

In addition to celebrating the potency of written language, “Unspoken” also confronts the societal expectations surrounding verbal communication. The speaker challenges the notion that spoken word poetry is the only valid form of expression, asserting the legitimacy of silent readership. This subversion of traditional norms is evident in lines such as “What if one likes it, but have lost one’s voice?” which questions the privileging of spoken over written expression.

The poem concludes with a defiant rejection of artistic conformity, with the speaker refusing to be constrained by conventional poetry rules. This declaration of independence underscores the poem’s broader message about the freedom of expression and the validity of diverse artistic forms.

Overall, “Unspoken” is a compelling exploration of the power of written language and the significance of silence in communication. Through its lyrical verses, the poem challenges societal norms and celebrates the beauty of silent expression, inviting readers to reconsider their understanding of language and artistry.